What am i missing on this?
my teacher said why they became communist but I'm out of ideas. can someone pls help i need it. The first pic is prompt and the next is my work. also if you just wanna read over it that's fine. No fake answers or Links tho.
the Bolsheviks took control. They were dedicated to a version of Marxism developed by Vladimir Lenin. It promised the workers would rise, destroy capitalism, and create a socialist utopia under the leadership of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union.
