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Please Help!!

Which sentence has the most traditional syntax?

A. The mother, twisting and waiting quietly, her ring circled a pale finger.

B. The mother waited quietly, twisting her ring around a pale finger.

C. Waiting quietly and twisting her ring, the mother had a pale finger.

D. With quiet waiting, the mother twisted her ring around a pale finger.

Respuesta :

A makes more sentence. 

I know it is not 'A'. Took the test...got it wrong.