Looking for feed back
written by Alice
Hello! I'm looking for feedback on my writing I'm to nervous to show it to people I know personally so this is my alternative! Enjoy
Last Updated
05/31/21
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3
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Chapter 3
As they walked back through the woods Alice thought about Quinni, she was strange even though she acted rude and self-assured there was something off Alice couldn't quite place it but she knew it was there, “Hey wait! Wait up” They turned around to face Quinni sprinting towards them
“What the hell are you doing here?” Evern exclaimed, “I... I want to come with you.” Quinni said, “Really? Why?” Emmaline said, Qunni looked down at the ground, “Well I was thinking about… you guys, and how it would help to have someone like me on the team.”
She said quietly, “How could you help us?” J.J asked Quinni looked up, “We’ll think about it with Alices and my status combined we could get into almost anywhere.” “Why do you even care?” J.J asked. Quinni paused, “Ok, ok fine I want to go with you because I can't stand this place, it's the same thing day after day nothing ever changes and i'm sick of it.”